Stream Of Consciousness Saturday – “Dave Would Have Been A Better Choice.”

This clever little idea to share your work comes from Linda Hill. Join in and share your ideas HERE.

The rules:

1. The post must be stream of consciousness writing, meaning no editing (typos can be fixed), and minimal planning on what you’re going to write.

2. The post can be as long or as short as you want it to be. One sentence – one thousand words. Fact, fiction, poetry – it doesn’t matter. Just let the words carry you along until you’re ready to stop.

Today’s prompt is ‘words that rhyme with rosy.’

Dave Would Have Been A Better Choice

Everyone stared at him. No one said anything. Bad orgood. If his heart had been hammering before, now he was convinced the silence must be making it audible. It was probably too late to save now. Exit was the only option.

“So, to the Bride and groom.” Josh raised his glass and the onlookers repeated his toast. He was aware that everyone must be able to see the sweat glistening on his forehead, and it was with no small relief that he took a sip from his pint and sat down.

“Prosy.” Dan leaned over to Josh and whispered to his friend.

“What?” Josh turned and frowned.

“The speech. It’s supposed to be fun.” He kept his voice low, for which Josh was thankful. 

“I don’t even know what that means,” although he had his suspicions.

“No, mate. I know you don’t.”

“Dave would have been a better choice,” said Amy, leaning across her husband.

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